New Story and Poem of the week and Inspiration Point
Fri, 2007-08-03 13:55
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New Story and Poem of the week and Inspiration Point
Here they are. Congrats this week go to Patrick Allard and Mupp:
http://www.abctales.com/story/patrick-allard/bite-bullet
http://www.abctales.com/story/mupp/old-brass
http://www.abctales.com/inspiration-point
your comments?
Congratulations, Patrick and Mupp. Both well-deserved.
Thanks :-)
PS I think Mupp's 'Streatham Kite Festival' is worth a cherry, too...
http://www.abctales.com/story/mupp/streatham-kite-festival
The only line I'm a bit dubious about is:
'tracing patterns in elegant, twisting spirals for all the world to see.' Repetition of 'world' from an earlier line... and it didn't add to the image. Something else there, I thought - though I'm not sure what. Just a personal thing, though.