Book Four; First Chapter

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Sat, 2007-08-04 16:04

I am just wondering what people think of this first chapter for my "future) fourth book; are there any improvements i could make?

http://www.abctales.com/story/jacobea/book-four-extract

Mon, 2007-08-06 22:56

_jacobea_

I admit it may need editing, and i have written several more chapters, but i would like to know what people think in case i have to go back and do a whole rewrite.

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