RE: How to become a famous poet - part one

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Wed, 2008-12-31 15:47

Topic posted in response to How to become a famous poet - part one : http://www.abctales.com/story/bukharinwasmyfavouritebolshevik/how-to-bec...

A very interesting poem. It certainly makes a point! RLP

Thu, 2009-01-01 12:03

alang

Really good, kind of a bukowski influence in there.

Thu, 2009-01-01 16:23

chuck

I liked it but I'm not sure repeating the last line is a good idea. The very last line for instance would have more impact (for me) if he just plunges it in and collapses in a bloody heap. What happened to macjoyce BTW?

Thu, 2009-01-01 17:03

Gilbert

Thought the poem was great. Macjoyce is a lyrical genius/madman. (Both may be applicable-he is effing brilliant, let me tell you.)

Fri, 2009-01-02 18:33

bobblehat2023

Macjoyce inspired me so much that I moved my office to Walthamstow this year. Cheers for comments on this.

Fri, 2009-01-02 19:41

andrea

Won't help - he's moved to Greenwich... He IS rather good, though :-) http://www.ukauthors.com http://www.ukapress.com

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