3 new poems

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Sun, 2009-11-01 16:54

3 new poems

Hi all, new here. I urgently need very honest feedback on three poems for my university coursework. I'd be so grateful if you have time to look at any/all of them. If you have anything you'd like me to review in return, please drop me a line. Cheers.

http://www.abctales.com/story/shatterboxx/sudden-fire
http://www.abctales.com/story/shatterboxx/old-notebooks
http://www.abctales.com/story/shatterboxx/butterfly-house

Mon, 2009-11-02 01:08

staticshakedown

I eagerly read through all three of your poems and liked them all very much. I can't really think of any constructive criticism, just wanted to leave a compliment :D

Tue, 2009-11-03 22:03

shatterboxx

Thanks :) If anything does come to you, then feel free to check back.

Wed, 2009-11-04 19:05

tcook

I have left comments on a couple. I think you have a rare, if as yet rather raw, talent. Keep going.

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