RE: The Girl at the Bakery Shop , A Love Story by Carlos Salinas

I don't know Carlos-- The Girl in The Bakery Shop-- it's a bit half baked for my taste. Gedditt!!!! Seriously, though there are a few secret rules to this site and one of them is that forum topics are for general discussions, not writers flagging up their work. It can actually put people off reading. But I will read your story and report beneath it.