jazzyb, for ten years old, not bad

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jazzyb, for ten years old, not bad

Just finished jazzyb's "There Came a Day" not bad for a ten year old. this girl's got potential.

Tony Cook
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Even better - get the nippers to go to youngABCtales.com which is designed specifically for kids writing. It's just off the blocks and doing reasonably well - so encourage all those children all over the world to get reading and writing on there. Shared experience at that age is truly empowering.
max_dog
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Ten? She could've fooled me.
ANGELA JACKSON
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i checked her bio, it states she's a primary student. how much truth is in that, i don't know, but who would do that just to get recognition? maybe anybody, but i think she's for real, there's just enough "child-like quality" for it not to be on the up.
Andrea
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I agree with Angela re the child-like quality. It's nice. Maybe mum helped a bit? It's hard to resist when you're a parent...y'know, the spelling, etc?
angela jackson
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true. she only has one poem, so maybe a little too soon to make a call. some people are naturals. let's hide and watch. I have 2 girls, and I agree, sometimes it is hard to go behind them. One of my girls is 12, and she writes pretty good, so maybe I'll get her to join here.
angela jackson
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sorry 'bout the misprint. meant it to say sometimes it's hard NOT to go behind them.
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