Good girl - Lydija_C

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Good girl - Lydija_C

Hey, this is really great. I love this in particular:

"I love the men I sleep with, sometimes briefly, but the love is there
and it's real. She brings in clothes from the balcony line
cracks a shirt in the air. A whip for his back.
Dropping pegs into a tub on the floor she curses her life. Under her breath.
Tomorrow when she slices onions, I will cry for her."

I'll even experiment with the bookmarks, Tony!

Ben

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I really must remember to put the link in when I flag things up. Thanks Jasper.
I really enjoyed this, the two images of 'a whip for his back' as 'She cracks a shirt in the air.' and 'Tomorrow when she slices onions, I will cry for her.' have kept returning to me all day
Oh, thank you. You are wery kind. Who is Elliot?
T.S. Elliot I think.
S'pose that's what u get on a writers forum. :P
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