Knock by Jenifer

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Knock by Jenifer

http://www.abctales.com/story/jenifer/knock

I can't do hyperlinks so I would be very greatful if someone could get one working for this, as it deserves to be read and commented on.

I loved this poem; it flowed, and it was really engaging, romantic and obscure. Just made me think of a cold winter's night when everything inside is warm, and I really felt a heightened sense of empathy for the character personally. I'm definately going back to read some more.

Anyone else agree?

Whoops, I guess I can do hyperlinks.
I liked this one, too, having done just the thing the poem speaks of! Lovely use of language, as well.
All this teenage memory thing - there's a rush of it on at the moment - and very good it is too. This is excellent.
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