Feedback?

I posted this linka day ago, and it might be the name that caused it to be ignored. I apologise if i seem greedy or am breaking rules by re-posting this, but i am quite desperate to know what you think.

http://www.abctales.com/forum/2007/03/21/concrit-opinions

Feel free to admit that it's utter rubbish, if that is what you think.