Hi im new and ive posted up a few poems

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Hi im new and ive posted up a few poems

Hi

Ive just joined abctales and have added a few poems i wrote when i was 16 (im 32 now). Please give them a read. Any feedback is welcome. i shall post some more recent ones up soon.

http://www.abctales.com/set/vossmang/poetry-15-years-ago

thanks

Nick

Nick, First of all a very big welcome to ABCtales. I do hope that you will add comments as well as ask for them! I did read your works (and please stick to the three postings a day rule) and I must admit that they did read like the work of a 16 year old. I suggest that you dust off your creative talent and write something more up to date. It's all in there, you just have to let it out!
Hi Nick I have read your poems too and I look forward to reading your new ones. Your poems sound a little like the ones I wrote when I was 16. I have a book full of them. I'm a born again abc-er, I hope. I posted work on here in 2004 and have just put two new pieces up. I look forward to your new work. Lindy
do be welcomed, nick to this wonderful place of writing. i enjoyed all of your poems. the inquisitive, still untainted mind of a teen allowing his spiritual thoughts and questions to flow from cosmos to mind to pen. a wonderful expression at such an age. kindly, `t. imaan tretchicovmanicova “when meditation is mastered, the mind is unwavering like the flame of a lamp in a windless place.”
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