Critiquing: Roy Bell

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Mon, 2001-06-25 12:33

Diana_Bird,_Editor-(unverified)'s picture

Today Roy Bell would like feedback on his poem Corvus Corone Corvix. Please send him your thoughts; links to his poem and email are on the front page.

Cheers!

Tue, 2001-06-26 17:54

cliff_spab

I know who you really are Roy.

Tue, 2001-06-26 17:57

Liana

And so do I Reveal yourself Roy :o)

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:00

cliff_spab

I'm sitting next in a desk next to Roy. I can see his face. I know the truth!

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:05

Liana

I know who you are too Spab :o)

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:07

Roy Bell

I am really Ray Bull, master of cunning disguise...

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:09

cliff_spab

Eat my spab ;o)

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:10

Liana

My Raydar is beeping ....it a bull*$%# detector

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:13

Liana

I Only Wish

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:18

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cliff_spab

Very clever Holmes

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:19

#11

Ray Bull

I am the man in the cupboard's brother...

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:20

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Liana

Go on...you can do it Roy.....take a deep breath let em all know!

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:24

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Roy Bell

Oh bum, allright then.... I am really curua- although I have no idea who that Spab bloke is... just walked in my house and started using my computer...

Tue, 2001-06-26 18:25

#14

Liana

Plop Sound of pennies dropping everywhere....

Tue, 2001-06-26 21:47

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stormy

Plop Ding

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