Compromise by Megan

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Compromise by Megan

http://www.abctales.com/megan/compromise

I liked your idea/ending for this, Megan!

I laughed at this one. A lot. I was guilty of having a list much like the first one, and wound up with a list rather like the second! Very witty. Nice, dry tone of voice as well. Well done!
I like the idea of a story that is not much more than a couple of lists! Very honest & direct. "P"

The All New Pepsoid the Second!

As usual, my thought is 'what happens next?' As everyone above has pointed out, there's a lot here. I'd love to see what happens with this romance. Is there a story to follow? I really hope that there is. Cheers, Mark Brown, Editor, www.ABCtales.com

 

Haha - I don't think I could do a follow-up story without veering into sticky fluffy candyfloss Mills and Boon land. Plus I'm not sure what my boyfriend would say - I already can't let him see this one cause I don't think he'd take the "no-arse" comments kindly.
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