Silver Spun Sand - Not the colour purple

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Mon, 2006-07-17 14:31

http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/not-the-colour-purple-0

Opened this thinking of Prince, instead read a nicley draw slice of reality. Haven't we all been there, impatient and oblivious to another's problems.

Just not quite sure of the end, seemed a little out of place.

Lisa

Mon, 2006-07-17 15:55

Silver Spun Sand

Thanks for commenting Lisa - much appreciated. I agree with you about the ending - its just I didn;t want to make it too 'preachy' so to speak. Have changed the ending slightly, perhaps it's slightly better? TY Silver Spun Sand

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