Stretcher of Faces by fventurini

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Mon, 2007-03-12 18:30

Horror is not my thing at all - but this is so well written that it deserves its cherry. Go visit the nightmare, if you dare:

http://www.abctales.com/story/fventurini/stretcher-faces

Mon, 2007-03-12 19:02

fventurini

I appreciate the compliment. I was told by my professor that "dream sequences" are cliche in fiction, so when I wrote this I tried to buck the trend and use the cliche to set up the final act of the story. I certainly hope you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Fred V

Fred E Venturini

Mon, 2007-03-12 21:02

lisa h

Interesting idea, kind of like Flatliners crossed with Jacob's Ladder. Certainly worth a read! Cheers, Lisa

Tue, 2007-03-13 09:14

tcook

I must admit that when I came across the first 'wake up' in the story I thought 'ahh, cop out' but of course it takes another turn.....

Sun, 2007-03-18 05:24

paul_k

I loved it. I posted a review of it on the other thread where you were saying you had just recently returned to this site. I think it deserves a cherry as well. Very well done.

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