The Queue Masters by hookersden

I really enjoyed this. I loved the names, and the whole concept of revolution by queue. The ending made me smile.

It does need a bit of work - one criticism would be that I think the dialogue needs editing, as the story lost a bit of pace mid way through, and the voice of the 'Limey' didn't work as well as the others.

Still a very satisfying read.

http://www.abctales.com/story/hookersden/queue-masters