my work
Sat, 2001-08-18 20:11
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my work
I was wondering if anyone could have a look at some of my work and evaluate it 4 me.I really appreciate other peoples opinions on my songs.
U can find it at THOM bright side of insomnia
There is only a small selection but i have lots more.Any help would be appreciated in the form of ur comments.
RichieDavid
THOM, your work is realy great, but it lacks varity. Then again so do most writers these days. You've got real talent, keep it up and try to write from the heart. Feel free to review my work 'From the Death of a Teenager.'
You can post your opinion here or in my own message column.
AJ
RichieDavid,
work lacks varity, surely variety would have been better.
Do you know I get the feeling that you are trying to get people to read your work, now let me see, what's it called 'Death of a writer' no, no, 'Pleas of a writer' no, no aah, I remember now 'Nope' can't quite remember. Perhaps, you or one of your growing admiring public could possibly give me a clue!!!!
AJ
RichieDavid
You Ass! How dare you judge my work before you have even read it. My grammer is inconciquencial (and yes, I know I probubly spelt work) but thats whats editors are for.
Although their opinions may be biased, my family and friends believe I have a great give for writing stories based somewhat on my own life.
Plus, look out for 'Iron Bricks', a collection of poetry which I have recently submitted for publication by Puffen books.
Look for it in your book stores next year, you immature, illiterate yak!
AJ
Touchy aren't you, never mind stick around you need a THICK skin here on the forums. And believe me I can always take what I give.
AJ
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