Heat by Camilla

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Heat by Camilla

This is a gloriously sensuous poem - full of powerful images - a true delight:

http://www.abctales.com/story/camilla/heat

Take a look at her other poems also. Camilla is consistently very hot! I just spent the last 30-minutes reading these poems and I can't name just one favorite. Here is Camilla's URL: http://www.abctales.com/user/36631 I wonder what kind of prose Camilla would write?
merry christmas.I would like to be able to write something longer,sustain an idea longer.I still feel Im writing hurried doodles.Poetry is more my thing though.But thanks again.It is 12 15 now Christmas.I must go to bed soon.

 

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This is a very nice poem too http://www.abctales.com/story/camilla/living-alone "Now she began to speak; her first words were 'darling' or 'my darling,' followed by my Christian name, which, if we give the narrator the same name as the author of this book, would produce 'darling Marcel' or 'my darling Marcel.' "
I like how "Heat" completely avoids every erotic cliche and goes somewhere very different, with the build-up to an innocuous-looking final line which makes your mind do all the work. Lovely.
http://www.abctales.com/node/521657 ... and here's another gem for when you're in the returned items queue at La Senza or M + S
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