Christmas Slippage... by camilla

http://www.abctales.com/story/camilla/christmas-slippage

Good to see I'm not the only one sitting at my PC on this fine, foggy Xmas Eve!

Re the above... generally a pleasant and evoactive little ditty. As I've mentioned elsewhere, I'm reading Fry's "The Ode Less Travelled" at the mo, so I'm beginning to appreciate such things as "metre" more than usual... and I find the metre of this piece pleasing!

Just a couple of small points of criticism...

1. Do you not mean "to be Martha Stewart"?
2. There appears to be a stray horizontal line to the left of "I'd" (2nd stanza, 1st line)

That's about it...

Have a peaceful Yule, Camilla! (and all others)

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