Fire At St. Elmo's by rokkitnite

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Fire At St. Elmo's by rokkitnite

http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/fire-at-st-elmos

Right off, I thought the title was really clever, but it didn't stop there. Most all the words worked well together and I especially liked the ending:

How can you stand in line
at bus stops
when every morning
you still find charred paper
trapped like leaves
in the folds of your jacket?

Nice, rokkitnite, but I'm still wonder who Zachary is?

Thanks for your encouragement, Foster. I wonder who Zachary is, too...
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