Sister and Hall by Parker
Sat, 2006-03-18 09:44
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Sister and Hall by Parker
http://www.abctales.com/story/parker/sister
http://www.abctales.com/story/parker/hall
both these poems resonate, i love the way you deal with relationships through everyday domesticity. in both poems it is the end that packs the punch.
great reads, ty.
Juliet
poetjude
I particularly enjoyed "Hall" I can see the scene perfecto.
I love the ending ( too right Juliet). I wasn't sure about broad band because of the connotations of broadband! But no - it works beautifully - I'm just being silly!
parker
Hey, thanks!
I wondered about the broad band/broadband thing. Maybe I will change it to wide band.
Cheers.
poetjude
No, 'broad band' is better than 'wide band'. I'd let it alone Parker!