Your numbers up by byddilee

http://www.abctales.com/story/byddilee/you
r-number-s

i enjoyed this and it had a great twist.

It is however a little overwritten, particularly the first paragraph, too many images to really picture the scene. And you need to get rid of unnecessary words e.g. you don't need 'herself' in this sentence.

"Anna has two kids herself and is always complaining that she can’t get out much"

Imo it would have more impact if it was written in the 1st person, and the scene when she catches them is very much in 'tell' mode. It would be improved with dialogue, particularly when she finds them.

but overall an enjoyable read.

Juliet