New SoW, PoW and Inspiration Point

Many thanks! I love that poem too! Soraia

I really enjoyed the Tales of the Green Fairy. It was pretty addictive reading and I wanted to know what happened. And I still don't. I would try and make the characters a bit more distinct, and the investigation was well written, but I would add a bit more about why they are so concerned initially. And I didn't get much of a sense of place. But, I liked it a lot. Really well written. http://homepage.ntlworld.com/drew.gummerson2