RE: Shedding-Does this suck massive a**?

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Sat, 2012-09-15 00:18

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RE: Shedding-Does this suck massive a**?

Topic posted in response to Shedding : http://www.abctales.com/story/chinobus/shedding
Been trying my damndest to make some form of decent poetry. Yet, after I read through this piece a few times I realize its not the best...or is it a more refined form of my past work? Feel free to praise, berate, or critique the crap out of this. Just a bit uncertain if poetry is my "thing". Also, what forms of poetry do you find most enlightening?

Sat, 2012-09-15 18:29

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I wrote a brief explanation of this piece of poetry. There is a method to the madness this poem presrnts and I hope I made a few things clear. Thank you all for reading and critiquing my work and expect me to return the favor soon. Best of luck in all you set your mind to writing friends!

- Chinobus -

Sat, 2012-09-15 18:29

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I wrote a brief explanation of this piece of poetry. There is a method to the madness this poem presrnts and I hope I made a few things clear. Thank you all for reading and critiquing my work and expect me to return the favor soon. Best of luck in all you set your mind to writing friends!

- Chinobus -

Sat, 2012-09-15 18:29

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I wrote a brief explanation of this piece of poetry. There is a method to the madness this poem presrnts and I hope I made a few things clear. Thank you all for reading and critiquing my work and expect me to return the favor soon. Best of luck in all you set your mind to writing friends!

- Chinobus -

Sat, 2012-09-15 18:29

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I wrote a brief explanation of this piece of poetry. There is a method to the madness this poem presrnts and I hope I made a few things clear. Thank you all for reading and critiquing my work and expect me to return the favor soon. Best of luck in all you set your mind to writing friends!

- Chinobus -