next time by Poet Jude

Thanks Juliet I still can't believe how much I let myself be bullied by ignorant people whilst I was lying on my death bed and this poem was supposed to be my way of sticking 2 fingers up at them. Do you think this is a better penultimate stanza? You cannot stop any of this because you think I'm inviting grandiloquent rants? Really you're rather dense. Smashing! ... I'll tell the doctor's doormen not to let you in... etc jude "Cacoethes scribendi" http://www.judesworld.net