LOVE MINUS ME by Sneak

Hi Sneak,
I came across your poem randomly. Glad I did!
I really like it.
'explaining existence in a joke that no one got' -- but better without the question mark. And 'breeze of regret' -- great.
It has a lyric quality (musical feel), and a good pace -- could also be slam. I think of something between Dylan and John Cooper Clarke.

Chris