balloons - rokkitnite

You're really on top form at the minute Rokkit. Flying high, perhaps that's the reason for the airship theme :O) http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/lull http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/balloons

It's interesting to read, because I've mostly read performance poetry from RN of late (sentence structure: malfunction), and comic at that, so it's good to see some unrhymed stuff creep in there. That said, I worry a bit that people might take him too seriously on the "o the humanity" bit. Perhaps that's more their lookout than his. Did enjoy images like oomed and sinking in a morning like flat champagne. Slight confusion at the start. If there was no title, it would be very muddling, but like I say, I enjoyed the change and I'm intrigued by the mood of it. K x "I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."