looking for some feedback ? :)

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Sun, 2013-07-28 07:53

hi Im new to the site. im 16 and love to write. I was just wondering if you could please read some of my work and give some feedback? from the works ive read everyone on here is INCREDIBLY talented and witty and it would mean the WORLD for some advice and tips :) Thank you sooo much! -Lilly

Sun, 2013-07-28 10:32

Canonette

Welcome Lillylove406. I've given you a couple of pointers: http://www.abctales.com/story/lillylove406/i-dont-wanna-be-alone#comment... Keep writing!

Sun, 2013-07-28 16:18

karl_wiggins

Lilly Love welcome. "American humourist, housewife and newspaper columnist Erma Bombeck wrote, "It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else," and she's correct. A writer leaves herself / himself vulnerable and naked, for all the world to mock and laugh at. So, without meaning to sound patronising in any way, please accept my admiration for someone of your age putting herself forward in the way you've done. My son's your age and although he possesses copious amounts of 'physical' courage - he's currently trekking his way across Costa Rica - he would never, ever approach a group of peers in the way you've done, inviting them to criticise his own work. So good on you and welcome.

Sun, 2013-07-28 17:36

pikeruk

These editors guidlines will help you get on Lilly... http://www.abctales.com/new-guideline regards Terry