Lard by pepsoid

http://www.abctales.com/story/pepsoid/lard-a-luc-bat-lament

When I first read this poem, I liked it for its simple subject. Then, I googled "luc bat" and I suddenly loved this poem for all that went into it. I can imagine it was difficult to write. Very nice, pepsoid.

In case others are clueless as well (i told you i know very little about poetry), i'm copying the "luc bat" entry from Wikipedia:

The Lục Bát is a Vietnamese verse form. "Luc Bat" literally means "six eight", referring to the alternating lines of six and eight syllables. It will always begin with a six-syllable line and end with an eight-syllable one.

The form has a rather complicated and yet simple rhyme scheme, in which the sixth syllable of the eight syllable line rhymes with the sixth syllable of the previous line, which in turn rhymes with the eighth syllable of the line preceding it. There is no limit to the number of lines, but the eighth syllable of the last line rhymes with the first line.