"the mmm girl"
Thu, 2006-01-12 10:51
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"the mmm girl"
story/tara_hanks/the-mmm-girl-chapter-18
I liked this original idea and good research. Perhaps it might benefit from providing some subjective passages. I mean introduce a personal slant to it which could provide opportunity to add some introspection?
The whole book is wonderful. Tara has worked and worked at it - but I see that this is the only chapter on here at the moment. Where's the rest?