Beat around the bush

http://www.abctales.com/story/mikepyro/a-memoir-what-about-you

Hi

I enjoyed the read and felt you described a young boy's emotions quite well. I would, however, like to point out a very basic point though and that is the spelling.
The following two lines detracted from what otherwise is a really good read:

Paragraph 4 - ' kid people gap at' (gape or gawp)
Paragraph 5 - 'you see it different to' (too)

I look forward to reading more of your stories.

thanks

Stewart