down by the river by maddan

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down by the river by maddan

http://www.abctales.com/story/maddan/down-by-the-river

well your tag is right it is a load of random silliness but excellently executed and very entertaining though i did get confused with the dogs and werewolfs and robots, but i don't think that actually matters.

Loved the style and sarcastic voice that runs through.

Juliet

Now I have the image of a decapitated lab retriever cross in the back seat of a volvo imprinted indelibly into my mind! But thanks, this held my attention all the way through and I am severely handicapped when it comes to attention. It is good!

 

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Dogs keep dying in your stories, Dan, and in very odd ways. Just got around to this – congratulation on SOW, deserving. I imagine you had a lot of fun writing this one, and it was fun to read. You weaved the seemingly separate stories together with skill, and wrapped it all up nice and quick, as you always do. A second read revealed a lot more, and things I at first thought to be only random, were in fact very well-placed details. foster.
Thanks folks, it was a lot of fun to write, although it felt like trying to ram the square peg into the round hole a lot of the time. Juliet, if it helps there are dogs, some vampires, a vampire dog and her puppies, and a wererobot. But you're right, it doesn't matter.

 

Thought it was great! A little hurried but a good read. There's nothing worse than a neighbour with crap wind chimes (except Juliet).

There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed -
Dennett

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