RE: Train thoughts
Thu, 2008-02-14 10:32
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RE: Train thoughts
Topic posted in response to Train thoughts : http://www.abctales.com/story/elizabethw/train-thoughts
I like this.
tcook
I quite like it! Sorry to be wishy washy but it doesn't sound that original and it doesn't say anything at all new or revelatory. However, it's clear, pleasant and sharp. I think it needs an edge to go somewhere. This is clearly someone who can write well - I guess she needs a topic with which to knock us out.