The Classroom

http://www.abctales.com/story/juliet-oc/the-classroom
Don't sell yourself short, Juliet OC. A good, well-written punchy feel to this poem. Particularly liked the lines:-

'I'm 'ard, I might
splinter, you all might get a piece of me.'

In my opinion, would be even stronger if you put 'you all might get a piece of me', on a new line below 'splinter' and perhaps, 'you might all' instead of 'you all might'. Dunno - it's your poem after all. What do you think?

Like the repetition of 'bothered!' whatever!'

An effective 'rappy' kind of beat all the way through - makes me almost see the kid what's sayin' it!! Enjoyed. Ty Tina