RE: (Woo s-ter-sheer)

The writing style is very nice, quite accomplished. But, as is the case with many "new" writers, I'm left with absolutely no memory of a character nor of anything significant happening. For my money, if you can't create characters people remember / care about or stories that stick in people's minds, your hard work crafting pretty prose kind of goes to waste. Also there are a few sloppy mistakes towards the end: missing full stops etc, that need sorting out. There is also, towards the end, at least one comma that needs to be a full stop or a semi colon.