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I really like the tone of this poem, it's quiet but that doesn't make it too slow, it sort of skips along. I think I saw this comment in another thread recently, but I really like poems and stories when you decide you want to be friends with the narrator.

Thanks for another lovely read mcmanaman,

lib

link...sorry I'm lazy!

 

I really get this - sometimes just pottering is much more fun than going out! Juliet

Juliet

ýeh, I agree. It has a an air of "this is really the way the characters thoughts were coming together in his mind". I´ve had very similar little chats with myself in the past. I like it
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