foreignerinaforeignlandJulietOC
Wed, 2006-04-26 11:28
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foreignerinaforeignlandJulietOC
http://www.abctales.com/story/juliet-oc/a-foreigner-in-a-foreign-land
I've liked all three versions but this is by far the best. I feel it really catches the mood of change. Like it's always been changing but something like the reintroduction of the death penalty suddenly makes you realise just how much. Loved the lines about the olive skinned people on the street. I know you like crit but I can't really find anything to point out.
Juliet