Harvest by ivoryfishbone

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Harvest by ivoryfishbone

just really liked it.

thanks ... glad you did
...and me. "squiggling row of piglets" - brilliant!
very good - husbandry, liked the last two lines, the sow is a clever image to choose for woman, piglets are cute aren't they - squiggling, and your speaker says what she needs to bring in this harvest, defining both roles, the care/protection of a household is husbandry - a masculine word - i was asked yesterday, where are they all? Still out in the field with their oats, mostly. I enjoyed your poem!

 

A snuggly poem for the passing of the elk call moon. Makes me wanna get a log fire and some oak beams, whip-up some homemade mayonnaise and collect classic cars. There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed - Dennet

There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed -
Dennett

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