Paedo Teacher by Spack

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Wed, 2007-05-23 12:45

ggggareth

Paedo Teacher by Spack

http://www.abctales.com/story/spack/paedophile-teacher-expos

I don't often comment on poetry, but I liked this. I particularly liked the "Pacman's ghost" simile.

Wed, 2007-05-23 13:01

Juliet OC

very subtle and raises some interesting questions about what constitutes peadophilia. The only line that felt a little awkward to me was the 'i suppose'. Suggests a judgment from the narrator where the rest is observational, allowing the reader to form a conclusion. Juliet

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Wed, 2007-05-23 13:11

Brooklands

Thanks Juliet and 4G. I have taken out the 'I suppose' line now. Thanks for that. Joe

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