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Wed, 2007-06-06 15:33

ScribbleScribe

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hey i am new member and i was wondering what other writers on here thought of my work. I would really like to know.

Thu, 2007-06-07 12:58

maddan

Concerning the prose (because I don't know the first thing about poetry): It's written in quite a nice clean chatty style. Sentences get a tad ungainly at points, but not really all that bad. I liked the one about fencing, it was short, snappy, and well argued. Although you may want to go over the paragraph about football, which is a little clumsy in places. The one about the dragon I didn't like, but that was politics so best not to go into that. Keep at it.

Thu, 2007-06-07 13:29

ScribbleScribe

It was actually a satirical piece, The Knight and the Dragon. Sophia Grace

Sophia Grace

Thu, 2007-06-07 16:57

maddan

Slaphead.

Thu, 2007-06-07 19:11

ScribbleScribe

(blinks) i'm staying out of this. Sophia Grace

Sophia Grace

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