RE: Even Flying Becomes Routine

Topic posted in response to Even Flying Becomes Routine : http://abctales.com/story/kusowkar/even-flying-becomes-routine

Any feedback would be awesome because I am reading this and some other pieces at a prose reading session at my school soon. I wonder: are the parallels between a trip to the airport/flying and spending a night with someone clear enough? Thanks!!! If anyone wants some feedback also, let men know.