no bowl of cherries - silver-spun-sand.

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Sat, 2006-03-25 22:44

maisie

no bowl of cherries - silver-spun-sand.

"but all the time
you's eatin' them
you's thinkin
what's for afters?"

wow, the whole essense of my life summed up so beautifully. Great poem by the way, much enjoyed :)

http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/no-bowl-of-cherries

Sat, 2006-03-25 22:49

sky

good poem. enoyed it.

Sun, 2006-03-26 11:53

Juliet OC

i love the way this makes you read it in a dialect, yet feels very natural. and a great moral without judgement. It reminds me a bit of tom Hanks in Forrest Gump - 'Life is like a box of chocolates' Juliet

Juliet

Mon, 2006-03-27 15:44

Silver Spun Sand

Thanks to all of you who flagged 'No bowl of cherries'. Like I said 'them's got them stones' - anyway!

Mon, 2006-03-27 20:00

archergirl

If I could have this printed on a t-shirt, I would!

Mon, 2006-03-27 22:39

maisie

for a t-shirt we'd have to leave off the 'them'........ then it could be every dieters:)

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

Mon, 2006-03-27 23:21

Silver Spun Sand

You got me thinkin' now guys. Great idea ........actually! 'Bin there, done that read the T-shirt' - now all I need's someone in the 'T' shirt business. Seriously though - I've enjoyed reading these - you've made my evening. Ty Tina

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