The Puzzle box Edward Picot.

I'm loath to flag this one because it's not actually posted on the site, we only have links to a private website. I don't like the site being used as a signpost to people's private work.I think it's very cheeky and egotistical posting to a writing site and then sending people away from the site to read your own little stash of work.

However ... after saying that the title of the book intrigued me. I've read all three chapters and think it's the most engaging and one of the most professional children's stories that I have ever read. It's wonderful. I found it a little bit *too* far fetched in places but my mind is probably not as open or accepting as a child's. What a fantastic piece of writing. I think you'll go far with this one Mister Picot. All the very best with it and well done.

Wonderful.