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Sooz006
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The Book: Chapter 9
Alice had brought the book home to read, though it repulsed her and she didn’t know why she’d done it. Her house felt contaminated, as though the...
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The Book: Chapter 8
The hospital had a different mood at night. Even on good nights, the empty halls created an oppressive feeling that pressed on the soul. It was a...
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The Book: Chapter 7
Eddie’s head snapped up, his scrawny neck all sinewy. He looked like a ventriloquist’s dummy. His eyes were bloodshot, locking onto hers, and the...
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The Book: Chapter 6
Chapter 6 Alice went into her office at the start of another shift: same shit, different day. The avalanche of paperwork had bred overnight. Where...
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The Book: Chapter 5
They’ve got no idea. Sweet FA. These people are Kafkaesque puppets dangling on strings, and guess who’s holding the wires? Don’t get me wrong, I can...
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Sweetheart, you must talk to
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody. Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...
Read full commentPosted in How do you forgive a parent?
Hello mate, good to read you
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
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A great piece, and a great
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
A great piece, and a great after story about your son having the same tech years ago. Us dinosaurs know nothing. x
Read full commentPosted in Passwords.
Hi, Maxine ... the joys of
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....
Read full commentPosted in Passwords.
This is deep, it's a pity we
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? ) I'd like to hear it performed.
Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...
Read full commentPosted in Alive N‘ 25*
Crikey .... I posted this
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry.
Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...
Read full commentPosted in The Book ..Chapter 1
Too many unpeopled people in
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...
Read full commentPosted in Anthem
Beautiful imagery. One of my
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
Lovely, Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tempestuous Stirrings
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