Sooz006

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I have 613 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 696669 times and 381 of my stories have been cherry picked.
78 of my 3,469 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 78 votes

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The Book: chapter 4

Summer made Alice happy, and her life felt perfect. She was overworked and underpaid like every health professional in the world, but she thrived on...
Cherry

The Book: Chapter 3

Chapter 3 The next day, Alice didn’t want to leave the tranquillity of the wooden bench in the remembrance garden behind the annexe. She was in a...
Cherry

The Book: Chapter 2

Chapter 2 Dr Alice Grant folded the empty cardboard box with a grunt, pressing the corners together until the tape crumpled in protest. She put it...
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The Book ..Chapter 1

The Book. Chapter 1 It’s dark. I’m trapped. Let me out. No, seriously. Get me out of here. I can sing for my supper. Am I living in a box? Am I...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 35

At the Dale View secure mental health facility, Carter Finch had been in isolation for three months. And now he wasn’t. He’d behaved so much like a...

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78 of my comments have received 78 Great Feedback votes

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Sweetheart, you must talk to

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody.  Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Hello mate, good to read you

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

Hello mate, good to read you again.  Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...

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Posted in La belleza

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 The water looks black, but

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014

 The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.

You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again

Aunty Pearl...

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Posted in Chicken Eye in the Sky

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 had learnt that it paid..

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014

 had learnt that it paid...learned

she would not allow a word to slip from her lips.  Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...

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Posted in Just Visiting

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Hi, Maxine ... the joys of

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....

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Posted in Passwords.

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This is deep, it's a pity we

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025

This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? )  I'd like to hear it performed. 

Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...

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Posted in Alive N‘ 25*

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Crikey .... I posted this

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry. 

Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...

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Posted in The Book ..Chapter 1

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Too many unpeopled people in

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...

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Posted in Anthem

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Beautiful imagery. One of my

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
 

Lovely, Jenny. 

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Posted in Tempestuous Stirrings

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Beautiful Richard. We live

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

Beautiful Richard. We live near the beach and every word of this rang true for me. Thank you for the read. 

Favourite phrase: Seaweed carpets of wet sand. 

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Posted in Farewell Sunlight's Delight

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