RE: Dream a little dream of me

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Tue, 2008-07-15 15:33

Hello Readers & Writers,

I wonder if anyone would be able to give a little constructive feedback:

It's a short story that I did for a Creative Writing course a while back.

I'm particularly interested in whether readers are able to understand the relationship between the two main characters, Mel and Jumbo.

Thanks in advance.

Karl

Other taster writings of mine are at The Writing on the wall