RE: Muddy Puddle Muddle Chapter One

Topic posted in response to Muddy Puddle Muddle Chapter One : http://www.abctales.com/story/hannahhepton/muddy-puddle-muddle-chapter-one

Hi, I am new to writing, and new to ABCtales. I would really love some feedback on my work, so I can grow and learn from some of you who have been doing this for a while. Muddy Puddle Muddle is only my second attempt, so would love some guidance.