RE: Muddy Puddle Muddle Chapter Two - The Journey Begins

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I would dearly love some feedback on this. I'm not sure about the verse style I have chosen and if I should re-write it in straightforward narrative. I would love to know if people feel the verse adds to the story, or should I change direction. Please HELP!!