Need some Feeback (will return the favor)

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Need some Feeback (will return the favor)

Looking for some feedback on my first short story. You can be as mean or as nice as your want. I just like getting other peoples' perspective on my stuff.

Yeah I created this thread as soon as I joined up. I'm a bit of the impulsive spaz. I'm starting to get a better handle on how this site works. Much better than any of the others that I have tried Thanks for the info! I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff. -Matt M

-Matt M

What about prayer?
"But when God talks to himself?..." Creation, I think.