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StoryThe Murder of Matthew Kilkenny Petrice26 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Protest Petrice66 years 9 months ago
StorySilver Daughter paborama66 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira Petrice26 years 9 months ago
StoryYuppy Guppy Petrice46 years 9 months ago
StoryPoem Pimp Petrice16 years 9 months ago

My stories

The Protest

Who are the real terrorists? The theme is judgement and how we compare ourselves to others noting their crimes whilst our go unacknowledged. I hope to receive FB. Does this piece contain 1 coherent idea that flows to a logical conclusion, or is it busy? Many thanks for your comments.
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The Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira

SYNOPSIS: This is a story of alienation and reconciliation between two abused women, one Indigenous who help one another to heal from the demons of their past. I have only presented the first part in draft because the scope is longer than the space provided. I would love feedback and if anyone wishes to request the full draft, please email me. Thank you so much!

Poem Pimp

We shot out of a rusty make-shift Kombi Van in front of the dusty tourist centre, anxious to get our sweaty feet onto some soft green after passing...

Yuppy Guppy

Hello I don't know how to edit my poetry properly because this is an experiment. I would be delighted with some feedback or some kind of marking tool. Thank you all.

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Novel

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I really enjoyed this brief short story which had me so intrigued. It has the makings for a novella or similar and I loved the poetic ending but really wanted to know more about the characters. I do hope you write the book, I would buy it.

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