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I have 308 stories published in
20 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 202484 times
and 71 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 232 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes
Pab Roberts
Swashbuckling joy
Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018
Thank you for this, it got my inner parrot chirping, 'pieces of Eight!'
Read full commentPosted in FROM DAYS OF YORE
ZOMBIES!!!
Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017
- petal, or metal pencil case?
- A beautiful use of imagery, like the teasing start to a zombie flick
- fluffy gobs OF sheep's wool
- I saW you walkin
- One hand in front OF her
- Growing loUder
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Read full commentPosted in The Field
Feedback (& a few typos)
Posted on Tue, 19 Dec 2017
- Earl Grey
- let's face it
- invariably (unless deliberate as part of character's voice)
- pre-pubescent? - the character comes across as maybe 14/15 to me (esp. if he's a 3rd year)?
- Parallelled (british)
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Read full commentPosted in Day 1. Cope Muir High
typo curmudgeon
Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2017
Hi, I am insanely jealous of your skill, for which I compensate with petty typo-spotting:
Decent into madness
Read full commentManager of Citadel Theatre - consistent with the capitalisation
Within 48 hours, it would all...
Posted in Ghosts of the Leith Citadel