The sunlight glare on the mirror washed out James Eliot's nineteen-year-old face making his eyes pale and translucent. On the wall there was a shadow...
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Hi, Jay. I agree with Elsie
Posted on Fri, 05 Dec 2014
Hi, Jay. I agree with Elsie here. I've read a few of your pieces and it seems to me that these are your personal views (I apoligise if I've misunderstood). These are questions being asked ever increasingly in England, as well as the rest of the U...
Man! This is one of the harshest things I've ever read - in a pertubed and beautiful way, mind. We've all been there. I still get a sick anxiety in my stomach using cash-points, even when I know there's money in. I reckon if I made a million quid...
I adore this use of language: treating it as something altogether more visceral, rather than just a narrative tool (although you do that incredibley well, also). The physical act of expressing poetry often gets left by the...
Hi, Jay. I agree with Elsie
Posted on Fri, 05 Dec 2014
Hi, Jay. I agree with Elsie here. I've read a few of your pieces and it seems to me that these are your personal views (I apoligise if I've misunderstood). These are questions being asked ever increasingly in England, as well as the rest of the U...
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Man! This is one of the
Posted on Tue, 23 Dec 2014
Man! This is one of the harshest things I've ever read - in a pertubed and beautiful way, mind. We've all been there. I still get a sick anxiety in my stomach using cash-points, even when I know there's money in. I reckon if I made a million quid...
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I adore this use of language:
Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014
I adore this use of language: treating it as something altogether more visceral, rather than just a narrative tool (although you do that incredibley well, also). The physical act of expressing poetry often gets left by the...
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